Jade, you've obviously done a lot of work on the initial stages of the project and have therefore created some exemplary planning and research. However, your cover and contents page are a little bit weak in comparison.
Some of the issues are: - a lack of a relationship between the cover and the contents page (no consistency in background colour and font style) - the layout of coverlines on the cover - the masthead lacks impact. - you MUST use as much media terminology as you possibly can in your evaluation in order to gain more marks.
Keep working hard, but spend a bit more time on your actual products - and you'll be happy with your grade at the end of the year :-)
Jade, you've obviously done a lot of work on the initial stages of the project and have therefore created some exemplary planning and research. However, your cover and contents page are a little bit weak in comparison.
ReplyDeleteSome of the issues are:
- a lack of a relationship between the cover and the contents page (no consistency in background colour and font style)
- the layout of coverlines on the cover
- the masthead lacks impact.
- you MUST use as much media terminology as you possibly can in your evaluation in order to gain more marks.
Keep working hard, but spend a bit more time on your actual products - and you'll be happy with your grade at the end of the year :-)