To improve my front cover i have changed the font of the main headline 'Us and the Lung' in my feedback i was told to change it as the font didnt stand out enough, i took this advice into account and changed it. I now think it stand out a lot more and shows a distinctive difference between the title of the magazine and the main headline. The next thing i changed was the text underneath the title which read 'Christmas Special', i have now placed it in the top banner headline and changed it to 'Our Christmas Special'. Then, underneath the title i now have a slogan for the magazine which is 'Resistance is not futile' I chose this slogan as i think it represents how good the magazine actually is (or how good i want it to be). The last thing i changed is the arrangement of the photos on the left lower hand side of the page. In my feedback i was told that there was too much going on at the top of the page, so i moved the headline of the '3 GIANT posters' and moved it at the bottom of the photos instead of at the top.
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